"William Germano may be a terrible birder, as he tells us at the beginning of this book, but he's certainly an excellent writer and teacher of the craft. On Revision is about the process of writing and its last steps, those of shaping a text and turning a manuscript into a well-argued and readable book it wants to be. With On Revision at your side, you will have a superb guide to gaining the skills and experience needed to finish your own project, all the while enjoying the elegance and wit of Germano's prose."
–Liliane Weissberg, Christopher H. Browne Distinguished Professor in Arts and Science, University of Pennsylvania